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Fran Gardner's avatar

Moon, spoon, June, cardoon . . . Love how you pulled out that rhyme!

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Sharron Bassano's avatar

A remarkable little collection, Sue -- fourteen lines of sweet nostalgia, an exhilarated piano brought to life, and a metaphor that I haven't yet deciphered. An intriguing line, "...he filled in the gap where the edges separated..." We never know what you will bring us. Thank you!

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Sue Cauhape's avatar

At first, that line was literal, but reading it years later, it does have meaning beyond that. BTW, that's a true story. I had a crush on the guitar maker in Capitola. He was GORGEOUS! Oh well.

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Sharron Bassano's avatar

Name, please...

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Sue Cauhape's avatar

Gil Carnal. I later saw him and the guy who glowered at me playing at India Joze. Much later, he was at Toots with a lady. So ....?

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Sharron Bassano's avatar

Nope. Didn't know him.

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