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Sharon Hudson's avatar

The hesitation, the free fall, the journey within…such a lovely swirl of becoming. I so enjoyed reading, and feeling your poem.

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Sharron Bassano's avatar

"Hold tight and wait / For the wind to calm."

"…the caress of skin and cloth and hair and grass and sand…"

"I'd rather have you gone forever / Than always saying / Goodbye."

Lovely lovely lines here, Sue. I wonder, had you begun these poems at an earlier time when the memories were new? Or are the memories still fresh after these many, many years?

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