Such a fine scene you have set your readers down into. I felt I was there sitting out on the porch with you. I would have liked the distant band in the night, and the airplanes passing overhead. A combo of man and nature. Lovely, Sue. A perfect example of how there is a story everywhere!
I was right there with you, Sue! Just mellowing out. The garage band sound takes me back, to the days my husband rocked the garage with various bands, a couple in which I participated. My newborn daughter's rockin' lullabies, friends and wine coolers. And then the quiet of the summer nights, eardrums still pulsing from the amplified music.
"Melodies waver with the atmospheric shift like an old radio wave whose reception drifts."
Lines like this are why everyone should read Sue Cauhape.
WOW! Thank you, Marty. That's a stellar compliment. Made my day.
Such a fine scene you have set your readers down into. I felt I was there sitting out on the porch with you. I would have liked the distant band in the night, and the airplanes passing overhead. A combo of man and nature. Lovely, Sue. A perfect example of how there is a story everywhere!
Thank you, Sharron.
I was right there with you, Sue! Just mellowing out. The garage band sound takes me back, to the days my husband rocked the garage with various bands, a couple in which I participated. My newborn daughter's rockin' lullabies, friends and wine coolers. And then the quiet of the summer nights, eardrums still pulsing from the amplified music.
What a great memory. It seemed like just about any kid had a guitar or other instrument and played in these bands.
I am grinning from ear to ear. :D
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Nice!
Beautiful
Thank you, David.